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Reviews for Piece of Love
Buff quatre@speakeasy.net 2003-02-07 id # 229
Eeee...that was so good! O_O Don't let anyone fool you into thinking you're bad at writing XD *cling* Write more more more!!! @_@ The world needs more (well-written) Tatsuha + Ryuichi fics. And the scene at the beginning was priceless :D Haha horny little Ta-chan. *glompu*

pinkbaka 2003-02-07 id # 230
It's a great start! I love the whole beginning... too perfect! and you named the bar Datenshi Blue, also a nice touch. ^_^ Now I feel inspired to write more myself. Good job!!

occurs missoccurs@hotmail.com 2003-02-07 id # 231
Very intriguing beginning! ^-^ The pacing and description was dead on to lead up to the cliffhanger, though I would have preferred a longer chapter. You know I love the way you characterize Tatsuha, so I can’t wait to read the rest of the story!

Nivella 2003-02-07 id # 232
Whoa. This is awesome! You write so well!!! They're so in character! I love the way you write for Ryuichi. *__* I hope you're planning on updating soon, I think I might go crazy if you don't! I'm hooked girl, I wanna know what happened!! ;_; Poor Tatsuha...

Genesis 2003-02-08 id # 233
*shivers* Wow, that was cold. Bad Ryuichi! Poor Tatsuha, no clue as what's wrong. Really great story! I think you got Tatsuha's personality down perfectly, especially the beginning where he's all perfect monk-in-training and then offers to sleep with the boy. That was awesome. :) I like that you gave him a high school crowd to hang out with too, sometimes I forget he's only sixteen. The interaction between him and Ryuichi was great. I like that he was speechless at first, because I would imagine he would be speechless when meeting his idol. Um, anyway, really great fic! I like it a lot and I can't wait to see more of it! :)

Noriko-chan spikedumbrella@yahoo.com 2003-02-15 id # 244
Eehhhh! Excellent chapter one. I want to read mooooore!! I really like the way that you chose to open it ^_^

~Noriko-chan ^_^

Janette sangsue@boo.net 2003-02-17 id # 249
I'm looking forward to the next part. You've captured Tatsuha perfectly and you write sensually. You put me into Tatsuha's head and I can feel what he's feeling. That's a great accomplishment. I'm curious though why Ryu gets cold at the sound of Tatsuha's last name....please, write the next part!

Dark higure70@hotmail.com 2003-02-22 id # 263
Oh wow this is so good! I want to so know what happened. You must finish this.

Alsie evil_handed_lawyer_boy_@hotmail.com 2003-04-14 id # 356
:D Very very nice!! I *LOVE* this pairing sooo much! I can't wait to read more! Keep it up! ::flashes a V:: ^__^

Anahita 2003-04-15 id # 358
Awesome! I'm so glad that you decided to pick this up again. Great storytelling, as always!!! ^_^

Ayako 2003-04-15 id # 359
GO ANOMAY GO! WRITE WRITE WRITE! ::chants::

::pats your muse on the head::

Pelianth 2003-04-17 id # 362
Merfle.* More ficcie goodness. You know, I would have been interested to see how the other ending you told me about would fit into where this is going, but I guess it's just as well.** More soon?

*(My all-purpose word for the month.)

**(Yes, that was rather cryptic and evil of me, wasn't it. No, I won't tell anyone.)

Dark higure70@hotmail.com 2003-04-17 id # 365
I'm so glad you updated! I was scared you weren't going to finish it. I'm really interested in what's going on...duh. Please update soon!

Genesis 2003-05-12 id # 393
Huh, how did I miss reading this for so long? Need new glasses apparently. Anyway, great chapter, as usual. I really like the way you did the interation between Tatsuha and his father. Made me smile and feel sad for some reason at the same time... Oh, and the teenage angst was well-done and the part where he comments that is all he needs is a sexy voice to be a priest. ;)

"Tatsuha smirked; he didn't have an award-winning and smut-loving writer brother for nothing." - That's my favorite line, though I love where he thinks of Genji as an ancient playboy.

Oh, though one question I had... when you said rehabilitation centre, is that like for drugs or crime? (Sorry, I'm probably being a little dim here.) But really another great chapter! :)

Otakugirl 2003-05-29 id # 417
This is such an excellent fic, I don't know how to tell you how much I like it! Please keep writing! =D *waving encouraging banners*

weib_kittyn 2003-06-16 id # 508
Dark Ryu-chan, and the mystery of the last name... Oooooh, gotta love that suspense...can't wait!!! Please continue!!!!

Ai,

weib_kittyn ^___^

Tatsuha 2003-06-29 id # 547
PLEASE.... WRITE..... MORE!!!! WHAT HAPPENS!?!? Bah we must know what happens.... your writing is FANTASTIC, and the plotline is so incredibly original.... please oh please oh please keep writing!

shuchan pinkbunnyshuchan@tohmaseguchi.zzn.com 2003-08-20 id # 763
Gyah!!! You just have to write more. *whimpers* I want to read more! More!!! I gotta know what happens next. You just can't leave me in suspense. Btw, now that I'm calming down a little, I wish to say that you are an excellent writer and that your story is very original. It's better than anything that I could ever even imagine of coming up with. Keep writing! Love, shuchan

rosevine 2003-08-22 id # 765
wow, this is a really kool fic!! Your writing style really flows and I just love this fic, please continue!

janette ayadevilkitty@yahoo.com 2003-08-30 id # 803
I think the way you're building things up is wonderful. dropping hints here and there, okay, now I know it's Mika and I wonder why
you've put my in Tatsuha's head and my curiousity is aching to be sated. And having the cameo by Shuichi and Yuki was a great touch. Shuichi had more of a spine, a stronger uke. I liked that. I also like how you've followed the consistency of making Ryuichi this split personality guy where he has two sides: the innocent and the sex god, althought the sex god hasn't shown up yet, you offer a good preview. it's like a double life or maybe hints to me that his own childhood was fucked up but that's just me reading things into it.

The only thing I'd say was a bit off to me was Shuichi, but maybe it was because he was so frustrated. He wasn't much of a uke, which is a nice change. Shuichi is a mite, OOC but not much.

Great job Anomay!

Ayako 2003-08-31 id # 814
YAY, GO ANOMAY! =D

That was funnn, but well, I'm not quite satisfied... =P You better write more soon~!

Ryu-chan's such a tease.

Lrigelbbub 2003-12-13 id # 1144
i like this^^ hope your write more soon

Lrigelbbub 2003-12-13 id # 1145
i like this^^ hope your write more soon

Lrigelbbub 2003-12-13 id # 1146
whoops! didn't mean to send that
twice^^ LOL
please continue
be safe
-BG

Silver-blue darkspace_kxi@yahoo.com 2004-03-14 id # 1860
Wow, I've really enjoyed your story! This was super awesome. Tatsuha x Ryuichi as a pair is still new to me but I just adore how you started the story off. At first I had thought it was Eiri who had done something but his sis, Maki,... woah. Would of never suspected her. I wonder if it happens to do anything with Touma. *wonders curiously* Anyway, I hope everything works out for you and I can't wait to read the next chapter for Piece of Love! ^.^

No One Special 2004-04-20 id # 2486
This was wonderful! Please continue!

Aya Honey pamediosa2002@yahoo.com 2005-05-13 id # 9137
Update soon, onegai!!!! *on my knees pleading* It’s so good! And I really love Ryu-Tat pairings! Would you put some lemon in some part of the story? *wick grin* Ja ne!!! ^-^

Ken4chan miow@gbg.bg 2005-09-08 id # 11582
Oh puhlease update! I don't know if I would be able to live if you don't write more sooner! It's so interesting and I was just soo into the fic and then you leave a cliff hanger! Waaah! Come back and write more!
I'll be checking for updaties!
Toodles!

Ida 2006-01-30 id # 15330
Oh! Please, please continue! I can't wait to see what happens next. This story is so exciting!

Danielle 2006-03-11 id # 16761
-squeaaaaals- That first chapter was brutal! ;___; cliffhanger galore, holy-god! I just can't stand the intensity. *_*

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