Reviews for Forbidden Fruit
| Silverone |
2005-01-07 |
id # 6633 |
I find it very strange that I read this seeing as I despise Ryuichi and Tatsuha together. But, you've done very well with it, by not only acknowledging the age gap, but making it the focus of the fic.
And you made Ryuichi seme, which is another lovely thing. It was also fairly dark in my opinion, without wallowing in the angst.
And I thought the facts you provided were interesting, indicating that you put quite a bit of thought into this. |
| Shinigami |
2005-01-08 |
id # 6656 |
| Omg, I'm blushing and I don't know why. Very nicely done. It brings the obvious into a storyline where obvious isn't usually present. I really love this. Darkness and all. //_~ |
| Aja |
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2005-01-08 |
id # 6660 |
| Fantastic! Good things can come in small packages and this is one of them! :D Very enjoyable; in character, purposeful, and moving. Well done. |
| kmyth |
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2005-01-08 |
id # 6664 |
| Nice to see some mature thoughts coming from Ryuichi. I like that side of him, even though it's not focused on as much. |
| HawkClowd |
2005-01-11 |
id # 6731 |
Wow. This story is absolutely delicious. Delectable. Tantalizing. I could come up with more words, but I think you get the idea. I love this story and sincerely hope to see more from you, sweets. ^_~
---Ren |
| Kisa |
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2005-01-11 |
id # 6732 |
| Seme-Ryuichi is indeed a beautiful thing as was this! Wonderful job portraying his thoughts to Tats! |
| PyroTease |
twistedturtle84@comcast.net |
2005-01-11 |
id # 6741 |
| I enjoyed this. It was short but it had all the pieces required for a delicious slice-of-life between the pair. Very enjoyable indeed. ^_^ |
| Deity |
deityrite@yahoo.com |
2006-03-15 |
id # 16944 |
| I found another one of your stories! And I'm glad. ^_^ How come the last line in both of the stories I've read always leave me anting to read more? Strange how that happens... Anyway, as I said before, keep up the good work! Until next time though, Bye! ^_^ |
| EIRI-CHICK |
2006-07-02 |
id # 22952 |
Famous Rockstar Caught Sleeping with Schoolboy, or something along those lines. You're still a child.
You could cost me my career. So tell me Tatsuha.
"Why can't I stop touching you?"
Because "Forbidden Fruit is SO DELICIOUS!!!
I hope to read more from you!
EIRI-CHICK
(-_-)=~
aka
PIKACHU GODDESS
(o';'o) |
| Daphne |
daphnepecanha@gmail.com |
2006-09-03 |
id # 26039 |
| I don't know if I left a review before, but anyway. Somehow I fell in love for this fic. It's so short, but it doesn't matter, because I think the words are perfect to describe the relationship between Ryuichi and Tatsuha. Besides, I love a seme Ryuichi. Anyway, it's beautiful and I like to know if I can translate to portuguese and publish in the fanfiction.net. Kisses. Daphne. |
| sakuma_sonnet |
chp_trick@hotmail.com |
2006-10-19 |
id # 27665 |
| I love u for researching so much!!!!! the fic was good too ^^ but getting info was a great plus ^^ |
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