melissa	amphysvena00@yahoo.com	2004-10-13	id # 5133
Your first Gravitation fic? I couldn't tell. I thought you did an amazing job. You write Gravitation better than most people I have read. Just overall you had good quality writing, that was funny and flowed really well. It was nice and long as well, which was a plus. Great job describing things and adding little details. This is my kind of fluff as well. You made it sweet and nice without ruining the characters. I loved how you wrote Shuichi and Yuki. I think they were perfectly in character. I really do hope you write some more Gravitation fics. You are a great writer! I'll have to check out your fanfiction.net stories.

PatoSan		2004-10-13	id # 5134
The indentations aren't recognised by the upload code here or something, I've tried. I also have a player which is making grating noises, but it's a MD player, and it's also blue and Sony. Damn you Sony! It's on its last legs I think. I can't believe you said you didn't want to tamper with brilliance when this fic was all a brilliant Gravi fic should aim to be! It was funny, dead IC and it delivered just the right amount of stick and fluff. I give the dialogue and interation between the characters a ten out of ten, and I don't just say that to anybidy. I tell you only the masters of Gravitation tap on Yuki Eiri and Shindou Shuichi this well. It was fantastic and I'd definitely love to see more of your work. I hope you do realize you can't possibly come into Gurabite with a fic this good and hope you won't be stalked and begged for more, right? It was one of the best one-shots I've read in a long time. You must write more for Gravi! I'd go onto mentioning all the good things about it, but I'd have to pretty much copy and paste the entire thing. Amazing job.

Aja (imayb1)	legatz@ameritech.net	2004-10-13	id # 5136
This was GREAT! I sincerely hope you'll be inspired to write more Gravitation fanfics! Your story is a credit to the fandom. If this is what comes of anger, I hope you become angry and frustrated by many things in your life! :D (joking!) There were a few errors a beta-reader would catch for you, but nothing major. I enjoyed the realism of the situation with the CD player. I also loved the description of the pictures on the slideshow on Yuki's computer. It's also obvious you have read and loved all the Gravi manga thus far. :D I so appreciate fanfic authors who know their stuff! Once again, terrific story. I hope you'll write more and thanks for sharing this one! :D

Hitomi		2004-10-13	id # 5137
Cute!! For a first Gravi fanfic, it was really done well. I look forward to reading more from you. Ja ne~

Sliefoxx	kitsune_103@yahoo.com	2004-10-13	id # 5140
Very cute. In character and you definatly did the manga justice. =^^= I'm looking forward to more from you.

Mif-chan		2004-11-05	id # 5412
Oh my God, that was cute. I really liked it. And this line: Yuki shuddered at the thought. He imagined Shuichi skipping in slow motion though a field of sunflowers with the blue circular object in hand. ...Just cracked me up. It was so funny! XD

LA_Brat	labratt777@yahoo.com	2005-03-21	id # 7944
I just began readigng material on this site March 20, 2005. I still have a few stories to go to make it to the first one posted. After reading and enjoying stories up to the most recent in the site, I enjoyed this one as one of the best.

Kainonis	ironical_jester@hotmail.com	2005-03-27	id # 8065
Jeez, the hold button IS my bane. I've never thrown away my own walkman before because of the stupid hold button. Through the whole fix, I was saying 'Damn it, just flip the hold button'. *snicker* Good fic, I liked it. It was a one-shot, but it wasn't a tiny one. I'm tired of the itty bitty little ficlets people write. They're just... meh. Anyway, good job!

weeeee		2005-03-28	id # 8101
LOL! That was a nice read. Real cute. You did an amazing job ^___^

elly	embian@nicemail.dk	2005-08-02	id # 10891
that was good i read it that was graet yuo jxzuyvcf8iæøjiojioedg87s9ui

PIKACHU GODDESS	PIKACHUGODDESS@yahoo.com	2005-09-13	id # 11675
This story was so IC, that I almost thought I was reading something that Muakami Maki-sama wrote! BRILLIANT! I hope that you continue writing more ONEGAI!!! EIRI-CHICK aka PIKACHU GODDESS (o';'o)

Marsupieni		2006-07-18	id # 24092
Oh dear. This was so funny