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vampiremia 2008-12-28 id # 36624
I liked it. Poor shu write MORE. Its funny about the air conditioner lol

BlackNeko 2008-12-29 id # 36625
Pretty good for the 1st time! A bit grammer and spelling mistakes though. Keep goin'! Meow!

thestalker 2008-12-29 id # 36635
Its good,some errors even for your first try. Keep going i want to read more

Dragonfly 2009-10-31 id # 37479
I love the answer machine's greeting! So funny! This story should be in the comedy section!

Mikarin 2010-01-19 id # 37604
Very interesting story. You don't need to count your words for each chapter. Just how many it comes out to be is how long it comes out to be. Wrorry more about the content than the word count. No one else will count the words anyhow. I can't wait to see what happens next. Plz hurry with the next chapter.

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