PatoSan		2004-02-05	id # 1426
Lol, intentions do tend to change once you get started (mind you, mine are staying in place, except I get more and more turns and side tracked >_

PatoSan		2004-02-05	id # 1427
Why does the rest of the message dissapear???? Anyways, I'm fond of any pairinggs that are well written and convincingly and at the moment you've picke dup my attention, keep it up! It has quite a few hits, just for some bizarr reason people don't review in gurabyteshyion as much as in othe rplaces... But fear not and keep writting!

Anon		2004-02-08	id # 1440
There's nothing wrong about writing unusual pairings like Ryuichi/Taki Aizawa, I think that was a good beginning ^^ It'll be interesting if Ryuichi continued to like Taki how he'd deal with the fact Taki hired people to rape Shuichi and after Tohma pushed Taki off onto the road.

PatoSan		2004-03-12	id # 1828
No worrries I like your fic! Ithink it's steadily improving as well and Taxhi's reaction is very interesting. Plesae do update soon!

PatoSan		2004-03-18	id # 1913
I loved chapter 7. I am a lazy bum for reviewing today but I'll review and tell you I'm really really enjoying this story so far. So fresh to see a different pairing for a change! Please continue!

PatoSan		2004-03-18	id # 1914
Yay! Tatsuha has entered the scene! Dun, dun, dun! Ooh that's going to be one hell of a date for our love birds, ne? Can't wait! ^_^ Keep writting girl, people do appreciate it!

PatoSan		2004-03-31	id # 2153
Agreed agreed! Tatsuha taking advantage of Shuichi is all good ^_^ I have to say I really loved this chapter! The story has just gotten incredibly good and it has a real Gravi feeling to it! You have imrpoved a lot! So many good quality fics these days, I'm so jealous! I really congratulate you for going and writing what you want. So many fangirls just fond of the same pairing! I like Yuki shu a lot , bu the other characters can be a pleasure to explore and it brings spice! I really like Taki now, too. That fic with Shu is going ro be great, I'm loving it! On this chapter I loved the bit with Tohma in it (he's one of me fave characters!). Although I find more and more I'm growing extremely fond of ALL the characters! This is great! Tatsuha was great and Taki is just really cool as well. All around, the best chapter to date. I can't wait for the next, keep them coming!

PatoSan		2004-04-05	id # 2241
Mmmh, it could al lay onmy shoulders! The responsability of a faithful reviewer! Let's see... I'd go with anything as long as it's well written! I always say that, I'm a fan of convincing writing rather than convincing pairings! Still, maybe you could give Shu to Tat for a change and have Tohma and Yuki together? I do like the pair! *whispers: I love Tohma!!!!!* Oh, well good luck in whatever you decide to do. I felt this chapter was a bit rushed, but it was still enjoyable! I think Ryu is sad becasue everybody wants him for his fame and not his real persona, or at least he thinks that way? I can't wait for the kiss, and maybe more? *nudge, nudge* ;)

Hiroshi Nakano		2004-04-06	id # 2251
MAKE SHUICHI/TATSUHA *jumps up and down* XDDDDD they are so cute together ^^. Evil cliff hanger >< *twitches* But i love this Fanfic sop much please continue soon *_^. meep

TakiFan		2004-04-14	id # 2361
Dont let tatsuha get ryuichi.... >.

PatoSan		2004-04-15	id # 2379
It did turn out ok. Besides, this story is not about the smut, that's just a plus. Between the two scenes and as silly as it may sound, I enjoyed the tat/Shu kis the best. Somehow it held more tension and feeling than the other one, but that was probably just me. Don't be embarrased, and try to add some little details on the physical feelings as well as the actual actions being performed in the future (if you want to continue writing smut, and developing it into somehting fuller, if not this is fine :D). I'm looking forward Tat's confusion over his feelings for Shuichi and Shu's own thought on the matter. Keep up the good work!

PatoSan		2004-04-29	id # 2608
Of course I'm always here! Itold you I'd stick with you! The only thing you owe me is updates on this story! Deal? :D I have to say I', *really* intrigued with the littel thing Shu/Tat have got going. Idon't know why, but it's really plucking at my strings, the way you are writing it. I've read a few Tat/Shu fics and this is by far the best, even though it has so little so far. It's good, really. I hope you continue this evil triangle of yours, I'm very intrigued. I liked the lyric scene, and the words were really nice. The but about them being crazy was great. The question is not if they are crazy, but if they are crazy foe each other ^_^ I like how you are writing their passion as nudging their way inside them and making it something deeper. Lovely story so far! Don't forget to update your other fic, too! Taki/Shu goodness, mmmh Best of luck! (I love Animegirl's work, I'm her beta and she's mine. I have The Opposite of Gravity 11 sitting on my HD, she's so gonna kill me; I've had it for weeks! I'm mega busy revising though >_> Let's hope she forgives me, ne? Hohohoho ;P)

Hiroshi Nakano		2004-04-30	id # 2617
ulp.......yuki is going to kill Tatsuha and Shuichi.......Btw great chapter this on almost made me cry due to Tatsuha and Ryuichi and Takis conversation pleas continue soon. ^^

Angrybee		2004-05-03	id # 2683
Jaw drop. That is...quite possibly...one of the best stories I have ever read. I can't review this, because I am currently too ashamed of my own writing skills. My goodness.

PatoSan		2004-05-06	id # 2707
I loved the new update! I really set myself to enjoy it. Cup of coffee this morning and toast with rasberry jam on hand, mmmmh. I'm glad Ryu and Shu are getting on ok. I positively loved the bit with Taki, Ken and Ma-kun. You wrote them really well, and it was so funny! I could picture Taki trying ot hide hjis blush and then they beat each other up, lol. The Tat/Shu part is realy grabbing a hold of me, too. When Shu thought Tat was hotter than Yuki O.o I actually want to see what happens between them and what Yuki makes of it. I hope you are not planning ot end this as soon as you say you are, I'm hooked! So what if I'm a shameless flatterer? LOL. I always say what's on my mind. No one told me to review this in the first place, and yet, I've been here since the beginning, and will be till the end (hopefully far away). Love it!

Angrybee		2004-05-19	id # 2928
Ahhh. Poor Tatsuha. Soooo much angst for the kid. Here you go, Tats, you take Kumagoro. Now everyone has someone. That'll work, right? And Shuichi? What is up with -you-? Come on, man. Ryuichi wouldn't push you off the building. *squint* Not on a fine day like today, anyway. Another great chapter! Thanks!

Angrybee		2004-05-19	id # 2930
Ahahahahaha. Yes. That would be why it is pervy! Gosh I adore this story. Such a well-written Ryuichi, it makes me spin with joy. :D :D I'm afraid ot Tatsuha now, though. THe boy has an evil streak, I think. Must get it from his brother. I am looking forward to the next chapter!!!

PatoSan		2004-05-20	id # 2935
Ooooh, I really enjoyed this chapter. I don't know if you've noticed it too, but you are improving with every chapter! Your lines are funnier and you are getting bolder. I loved the the day out with Ryu and Taki. It was very enjoyable to read, it really was! My fave has to be the Shu-Tat angsting though. I'm such a sucker! *cries* Their kiss was hot and I loved all the things you made go through their head, the dreams and the hesitation. It was very much like Tatsuha to be so determined, I wonder what Yuki would make of it! I'm really looking forward the rest! Thanks for the update!

Poclastamist		2004-05-25	id # 3038
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderfully enchanting story! Love what you've done with Taki (meow)!!

PatoSan		2004-06-03	id # 3207
I don't know who should get Shu, but I'm intrigued as to what Yuki would do if Shu did chose Tat over him! What a sight that would be! Great update as always. Lovely stuff with the rice and Ryu-Taki moments. I was uber glad to see Tohma in the mix and I thought you got Suguru down really well! I'm loving it all, and I'm impressed by the amount of twists and new material you keep coming up with. Keep it up!

Hiroshi Nakano		2004-06-09	id # 3308
OO...i love this fanfic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! poor Taki ;.;....nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu K Sama!!!! poor k T.T....this is such a cool fanfic....are Tatsuha and Shuichi gonna do it any time soon Oo...i want to know...and and can u hook up K and Tohma..*chibi eyes* and maybe Suguru and yuki...or suguru and hiro..They so cute...hope to see the next chapter up and running soon, *.^ ta Hiroshi Nakano ^_^

Sasheenka	Sasheenka	2004-07-09	id # 3762
Wonderful story so far! I really love this. Tachi/Ryuichi...absolutely georgeous. But there should be someone to comfort poor Yuki...it's not fair to him....

Electric_Barbarella		2004-07-13	id # 3826
I've been an avid reader of this since chapter 1, I was sure I reviewed earlier... I'm such a scatterbrain. This is such a great fic, one of the best Gravi ones I've read. You capture all the characters perfectly, and Taki/Ryu works so well (just don't let Tatsuha steal him!) You know, I wouldn't mind a bit of Yuki/Suguru, as it's a pairing I quite like but never see around much. And it would be very interesting to see Tohma's reaction to it.... Anyway, I love this story to bits. *eagerly awaiting updates*

Flamingolo		2004-07-19	id # 3921
I love this story so much! Update again soon!

Flamingolo		2004-08-27	id # 4490
Nice new chappy! You're certainly keeping things interesting as hell. I expecially liked the way Taki and Shu interacted; under the circumstances, it seemed really IC. Looking forward to more.

Shiny Ryuichi Sakuma		2004-09-07	id # 4663
MORE. NOW. NOW. NOW. :X This is excellent and my goodness, the pairings are getting switched around and confusing me! X_X I love it. It's very entertaining. ;)

bluesake	Bluefire2heart@Aol.com	2004-09-07	id # 4668
Interesing....I don't really read this coupling but I LIKE IT! XD more!

Sasheenka		2004-10-03	id # 5020
Thank you so much for an update! I love this story a LOT! Taki is wonderful as are all the others! Suguru is so kawaii!!! I'm a fan of his.

Akemi		2004-10-04	id # 5040
Yayness for Tatsuha/Shuichi! :) Such a lovely couple and I do think they would make a better lovers then Eiri/Shuichi. :D Hee hee but I do love my Ryuichi/Tatsuha stories. Urk. I'm contradicting myself. Shame on me. Update again soon, please?!

Aenima	eon_blue_apocalypse@yahoo.com	2004-11-25	id # 5777
So...I finally got around to reading this...and I'm so glad I did! This is a really good fanfic, probably one of my favorites....very nicely done, and I love the way you write Ryuichi. The couples are convincing...the entire story is convincing. I hope you pair up Suguru and Eiri. I've never seen that coupling before, and I think it'd be really cute. ^-^ I'm looking forward to updates!

evil_pillow		2004-12-14	id # 6218
wah!!! this is so good! i saw this fic on fanfiction.net but i couldnt find it after a while! yaaaaaaayyyyyy! i luv this fic its so sweet! but will tats and shushu stay together? im not really a fan of them... DA PILLOW PERSON LIKES YUKI AND SHUSHU TOGETHER!!! (O^.^O) tah tah~! far well~! buh bye~! and i hope ya dont get killed by raging fangirls! ^.~

Koneko		2005-01-11	id # 6733
Yay yay yay for YukixSuguru! For some reason I really adore this pairing and I can't wait for the next chapter. One of the many reasons I love this fic is because of the pairings, they're so unconventional and yet they work. I've always been into off-the-wall pairings (YukixShu annoys me like hell) and this fic manages to make them all interesting and believable. Update soon!

Akuma		2005-01-13	id # 6758
Damn you and your non Yuki/Shu-ness! Nah, i keed. What can i say, i've got a soft spot for dark haired guys. Not to mention a sadistic little blond. I like this, it's very well done. I like how it has more substance other than fluff and smut. (and believe me when i say that i love my smut) So please keep it up, but honestly, I'd love to see one last fling of passion between the beloved couple. (and if you have no idea who i'm talking about, shame on you!) I was thinking a fight, they get rough, one last night together, and THEN they're able to part and live their lives with their new lovers. So basically: Yuki and Shu have one last night before moving on. Also, avoid all around happy endings. I despise that. It is so improbable that all these relations ships would end well, but you're the writter. Welp. that's my two cents, I'm really enjoying it. keep it up. ~Aku-chan WHOOP! Two more things: 1.) You keep spelling Aizawa's name differently (Taki, Tachi) um, i'm not sure here, but in the anime it's Tachi... but i don't know what's right, but i just noticed it. 2.) Hey, your writing is awsome, and i know it can be embarrassing at first, but try for a steamy scene. I have a feeling you could pull off a really good one. You do the beginning and end parts really well, you're just missing the middle! Go for it! Okay, i'll shut up now. *crawls off to laptop to write*

Vivi		2005-02-10	id # 7205
NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! you can't do an evil ending! *sob* At least not for Tatsuha. Please? Please, please? I'll give you an orange and strawberry sherbet cake! I love my baba Tat-chan. I like the way you've done him as a bit more than the sex obsessed weirdo he's usually portrayed as. =) He seems so much more vulnerable than normal; so I don't want to see him get hurt. Plus if you have to be horrible and not have Yuki/Shu you have to have Tat/Shu to make up for it. ;) I love all the detail that's gone into this fic and Ryu/Taki has become my new fave pairing after Yuki/Shu. Never seen it before but loving it! I like the final passionate fling idea, but lookng forward to the next installment whatever it is. =)

Sliefoxx		2005-02-12	id # 7227
I read the whole damn thing through for the first time last night. I love it! I've never seen Ryu x Taki pairing before and am totally enjoying it! (Plus he's not a complete douche-bag in this ... that's a plus) I've always liked Tats x Shuichi but haven't seen anyone pull it off before without the fic dripping with angst; you've made everyone totally in character without making the story painfully depressing ... most of it is funny. Suguru and Yuki ... ::giggle:: I've been wanting to see those two together ... Okay! I'll stop the fan-girlish squeals and move along. I LOVE THIS! I'm so looking forward to the next update. Soon please!

thistle		2005-05-10	id # 9059
AAAHH. I've started reading this yesterday and I was so sure that it must be finished and was so excited to see what happens in the end and it's not done!!! x_x UPDATE. pretty pretty pretty please??? I'm dying to know how you wrap this up. Pulling at my hair even. This story has been so awesome. I adore how you've portrayed each character though I feel bad for Tohma because OMG Tohma/Yuki FOREVAH man. Muahaha. But anyways, I've really enjoyed this story so far and would love to read the end and the sequel if you get around to it. :)

Tephra		2005-06-30	id # 10071
I started reading because Taki/Ryuichi was a pairing I would never have considered. Now it's Yuki/Suguru that's keeping me hooked (another pairing I would not have considered). :)

leviathan		2005-07-12	id # 10357
I really like this. I've never read a fic with ryuichi/taki pairing but your fic really caught my attention.

thistle		2005-08-14	id # 11154
awww. they're seriously too cute for words. *hearts zee story*

Morvena		2005-10-14	id # 12347
Aaaaw, so it ends ;_; I kinda expected more Eiri/Suguru action ;D Maybe you can write a sequel? ;>

Face		2010-04-29	id # 37673
One of the reasons I enjoy your work so much is because you write about Taki like a HUMAN being. He is my favorite character (aside from K and Hiro) and I love to write about him as well. Just wanted to say that. So, I started reading this fic LONG ago before I lost internet connection. I remember imploring the heavens and crying when it got shut off. So I'm sitting here one day and it hits me..."I never finished that awesome fic by silverone." And so here I am, I finally finished it. First, let me start by saying I LOVE how you wrote this fic. I really enjoyed how it started off with Taki and Ryuichi, then because of that it brought in Tatsuha, which brought in Shuichi and Tatsuha, which brought in Suguru, which brought in Suguru and Yuki, and how everything just came together. I'll admit, the ending was a bit open ended in some parts, but I feel as if that was your intention, and there's nothing wrong with that. Haha, other than TakixRyuichi, my favorite ending scene is with Hiro and Shuichi. Specifically this part:: //“Hiro! When did you become a pervert?” Shuichi looked positively scandalized. “Hey, I’m not being perverted, I’m just curious. If you go by appearance, they might as well be the same guy, right?” “Well,” Shuichi looked around quickly to make sure no one was listening than leaned in closer to Hiro. “Well, when Eiri comes, he’s really quiet, but Tatsuha…”// I really enjoyed that bit of interaction, and how it ended when Shuichi started to go into disturbingly specific detail. Lol. In short, I really loved this fic and appreciated all the different perspectives/POVs. I felt they added to the story and were all relevant to each other in one way or another. I'm terribly sorry my review is a thousand years late, and I don't even know if you're still writing, but I felt that this deserved a damn review, whether you'll see it or not. Anyhow, GREAT job. Happy writing!