tsubaki		2006-11-03	id # 28205
Scoundrel Yuki. This is a good one shot, although the angsty lines were a little repetitive. He went around in circles with his thoughts a few times but other than that it was good. Nice work

fuzzybunnytoo	fuzzybunnytoo@yahoo.com	2006-11-03	id # 28206
I have to review this fic becuase it was so sad and wonderful. It is what had to be done. There is no fariytail ending is there. This was real and beatifully written. I am left so sad for Shu and want so bad to help him but that is life, it happens and others don't even see what is going on or can tell your intermost thoughts. They have no way of knowing and the is no wya of helping. It is over, I still love Yuki but it is over and I must find a way to go on by myself. You have writtne what really happens, so now I must go and cry myself to sleep.

tsuki		2006-11-03	id # 28210
That was so sad,it made me cry.Poor Shuichi.Is that really the end?It'll be really great if you'll continue this and I really like this story,though I'm kinda curious why you don't like it.I've read your other fics too,and this is as good as the others,and even better if you'll continue this!(I'm trying to convince you.Lol)But anyway,I'll respect your decision,and thanks for posting!!^_^

pinkrose		2006-11-06	id # 28326
not bad.. not bad at all. deep, man, deep.

Crmy	gothic_fairie_gurl@yahoo.com	2007-01-01	id # 29813
You should diffenitly write a sequel, Yuki' POV lol and make him all groveling and trying to get shuichi back and stuff lol, anyway GREAT!!!!!!! Loved it Cheers Crmy

EIRI-CHICK		2007-08-18	id # 34926
Very heartbreaking, very tearful and very repetative at times. But the repetative nature of it makes it sound more real, as if we're inside of Shuichi's head. Good job! EIRI-CHICK (-_-)=~