Gabrielle Angelique	lestat_cherie@yahoo.com	2006-10-20	id # 27716
Awww...that's so sweet...I personally enjoyed chapter 4 the most..so keep up! And add more!

Ashley Vulpix	ashleyvulpix@gmail.com	2006-10-21	id # 27729
I used to read your Kisses in Fanfiction.net, and I was so sad when I couldn't find your story anymore. Is beautiful, I love those little drabbles. Hope you can upload them all eventually!

Avi	esotericisin@aol.com	2006-10-22	id # 27785
I've read most of these over on ff.net, had em' favorited, but then I suppose you took them down. I'm so happy you've brought them to gurabite! If I could work up the energy to log in, I'd add it to my rec's. Keep up the amazing work!

SSF		2006-10-22	id # 27788
The story is now faved, just like I said I would do. Loved it. Looking forward to seeing more of the chapters appear.

Suanne		2006-10-25	id # 27891
When I read in "jolt" that you began this in early 2005, I was wondering...how'd I miss them all? Then, I checked your author listing and realized you'd just joined this site. I'm so glad you did. These are utterly charming. While you say your characterization shifts, I don't really feel that in essentials it does. Throughout all them you've captured that marvelous sense of Yuki playing Shu on a silver fish hook with a silken line, catching him in a velvet net when he's reeled him in. Trying not to give anything away...but..Shu on 'Jolt' boggles the mind; Shu counting the minutes until Yuki insults him; Shu's definition of "heaven"... Yuki at the concert...these are all so very Yu/Shu. Thank you for these, and waiting eagerly for the next.

Gabrielle Angelique	lestat_cherie@yahoo.com	2006-10-26	id # 27910
Hmm...how can a man live without imagination? It's a wondrous gift to be bestowed with a wide one. I like the mellow sweetness, it's a break from those rollercoaster fics I have fallen in love with out there...but there's a lot of room for improvement and you can also improve (albeit it was good already). Thanks for the sweet kisses.

yukinshuichi4eva	tennisanddancechick@hotmail.com	2006-10-27	id # 27924
I really enjoy reading these. You have some very interesting plot lines (jolt, lol!) and your grammar is generally very good. I hope you continue!

Celeste		2006-10-27	id # 27932
This is good stuff!!!!!!!

Ray		2006-10-27	id # 27935
Honey, that's an awesome fic! Your updates make my day each time. The stories are at the same time sweet, angsty, romantic, deep, cute, passionate... I can go on like this forever :) Keep 'em coming please! Love, Ray

Gabrielle Angelique	lestat_cherie@yahoo.com	2006-10-27	id # 27944
This is getting more wonderful. Sweet but not fluffy enough to gag on. You portray their love so warmly it's making me smile everytime I think about it. The chapters are short but we can't have it any other way. More please.

yukinshu4eva	tennisanddancechick@hotmail.com	2006-10-28	id # 27956
I love it! I really like your drabble fics. :) It's making me want to write some. Hmmm...*darts off with an idea* ^_^

happynoon	noonsam@aol.com	2006-10-28	id # 27979
These are wonderful, little peeks into the lives of our favorite men. You have captured them perfectly and I look forward to more!

Gabrielle Angelique	lestat_cherie@yahoo.com	2006-10-30	id # 28051
I like the fact that you post two chapters per update. Hmmm. And what does the number at the beginning of the chapters mean? Nehh, maybe you have explained it somewhere and I missed it. Anyway, your ideas seem to be never-ending! Stereotypical but wonderful. Sweet and emotional. Just the right mix.

yukinshu4e	tennisanddancechick@hotmail.com	2006-10-30	id # 28057
I really like these little drabbles you've got going on here! Where are you finding these challenges?

tsubaki		2006-10-30	id # 28058
These are really nice short scenes. I like how it comes all together in a wonderful background of what the Yuki-Shu relationship is about. Really liking this, and hoping you will add more scenes in.

Headcase, the whackjob	baelra@aol.com	2006-10-30	id # 28061
the numbers are for the LJ challenges yon author of great goodness partakes in. I do love this fic and it has given me the inspiration to continue with mine own. I did note one slight disparity in the fic, but perhaps it was intentional... it started out with "him" and became "you" you might want to adjust that. Mine only found discrepancy.

Ray		2006-10-31	id # 28095
Yay, an update! Thank u!

yukinshu4e	tennisanddancechick@hotmail.com	2006-11-01	id # 28163
Oh man, what's wrong with Yuki? Can't wait to read the next installment. ^_^

Gabrielle Angelique	lestat_cherie@yahoo.com	2006-11-02	id # 28171
It is so nice! It's just the kind where I turn all semi-goo. Awww. And the latest was different and nice too, with Hiro and all. Where was Shu staying at the moment? I'm really looking forward to this. The latest was different because of the friendship theme and it's so niiiicccceee....ah, I'm repeating myself. Love it.

Gabrielle Angelique	lestat_cherie@yahoo.com	2006-11-02	id # 28172
It is so nice! It's just the kind where I turn all semi-goo. Awww. And the latest was different and nice too, with Hiro and all. You showed an entire different sweetness with this one without affecting the quality. I'm really looking forward to the next kisses.

tsubaki		2006-11-07	id # 28355
Painful... you really would me up for chapter 16 and the betrayal. THe handholding was a sweet touch, I must say. I'm eager to hear how their love plays out and finds away to resolving this. But the ramifications and the echoes of the trauma will be difficult to manage, I think. Shuichi is a very sensitive person in this story, in my opinion. Poor baby...

Ashley Vulpix	ashleyvulpix@gmail.com	2006-11-07	id # 28358
One of my favourites, painful, but with a little ray of hope, just beautiful. Ok, I also like Yuki angst, but this topic, the way you handle it, well, it's wonderful. Really, love all your kisses!

yukinshu4e	tennisanddancechick@hotmail.com	2006-11-07	id # 28361
O_O I totally wasn't expecting that, but it makes sense now why Yuki sounded so down on the phone. My heart is beating a million miles a minute. I can't even handle the emotion you put into these drabbles, it's amazing. Please, please, put up chapter 17 soon!

Gabrielle Angelique	lestat_cherie@yahoo.com	2006-11-08	id # 28364
Wow...pocky for your muse!

yukinshu4e	tennisanddancechick@hotmail.com	2006-11-12	id # 28436
Please, please, please update! I'll give you pockey! *Tries to push a stick of pockey through the screen* Okay, well maybe that won't work, but I'll love you forever! ^_^

tsubaki		2006-11-13	id # 28482
Ano sa: Sweetly depressing in a way but also sadly romantic. Nice to know that they can show how they feel yet not speak. There are just times when words really do get in the way, even for a songwriter and novelist. I think I had read up to this chapter before, so I am hoping to read more of this soon!

koo		2006-11-13	id # 28483
I know Ive read this somehwere else..just cant for the life of me remember where...*scratches head*

Iname		2006-11-13	id # 28486
Yay! This is really good! Short, but good. Which isn't enough...please update soon, I can't wait for the next one and the one after. Although Eiri's treachery pisses me off, it pisses me even more that Shu's acting like this. Ah well, they both deserve it. ^^Thanks for the moving plot so far. So continue, I can't wait!

yukinshu4e	tennisanddancechick@hotmail.com	2006-11-19	id # 28668
Ahhhhh! *sniffle* Sooooo amazing. Please update soon! I can't even write a coherent review!

ashcat		2006-11-21	id # 28733
Chpt 19- I loved rereading this one - it's one of my favorite from your series. I really can see Eiri snapping like that, it seems so realistic, and how well you have Shuichi understanding him. I just love it:) You're writing is always so powerful, it's amazing how much emotion and story you can pack in just a handful of words!

Suanne		2006-11-21	id # 28751
Snap: I feel like I'd like to go in and comment on each of these, but I think I'd end up basically saying the same thing, just variations on a theme. I liked the connected set, but these independent vignettes are very, very special. Each one is so wonderfully focused on one singular aspect of this complex relationship. I think this one (snap) is my favorite so far in that it captures one of the most difficult but important aspects, i.e. that uncontrolled part of Yuki, the part that terrifies him so much more than it does Shu. On a purely technical note, I don't think I've ever seen anyone use the present tense more effectively.

yukinshu4e	tennisanddancechick@hotmail.com	2006-11-23	id # 28801
O_O Yuki's so protective! ^_^ I'm glad you captured that side of him! It's so posessive, I love it! He can be scary, though. Can't wait for more! ^_^

ashcat		2006-11-25	id # 28839
Wow, I really liked chpt 20 & 21. The introspection of Eiri in chpt 20 didn't feel forced or OOC, and even his apology had a nice in character ring to it. I liked how Shuichi accepted it but still pointed out how abnormal it was, it was a very human and nice touch! chpt 21 - I liked it alot - showing how although Eiri knew life would 'return to normal' that he was happy to indulge in Shu a bit longer, showing that he's lonely but not broken when he's away. The sex was nice and didn't break the flow of the work :) Really as always so impressed with you :)I love your writing!

Michelle aka Graviluvr	y40i1ov3r@yahoo.com	2006-11-25	id # 28849
Everytime I finish reading an update I always have a huge dorky smile on my face. Very well done with the fluff. You write exceptionally well. I look forward to reading more of your bits.

ashcat		2006-12-20	id # 29473
chpt 22: I think this is my favorite so far -- the realism and the heartbreak coupled with the confusion of the characters god it was so real I just loved it :) I really really appreciate you for writing and sharing your stories. I loved how you made shuichi mature without making him seem like another person and that you were able to keep Eiri real and also show his character growth as well!

Millie		2006-12-20	id # 29479
Very good! I read all twenty chapters and enjoyed everyone of them. I can't wait for more! Update soon!

Suanne		2006-12-21	id # 29503
I'm kinda disappointed. This is #30, but only Chap 22. Does that mean we won't get the other eight? If so, I'll be content, (don't have much choice, do I?) because this is a perfect final "chapter" to this series. The final line pretty much says it all. Truly beautifully conceived and executed. Some of my favorites of all Gravi fanfic. Thanks so very very much for posting.

neafaroo		2006-12-27	id # 29663
LOVE IT!!! I love all the drabbles so far... and holiday is wonderful... ^_^

Gabrielle Angelique	lestat_cherie@yahoo.com	2006-12-27	id # 29664
It's a different take in holidays celebration for them. It's so nice and sweet. Loved it. Happy holidays! You twist their interactions with each other in a funny way. Hahaha.

CactusDog		2006-12-27	id # 29665
Holidays - Really enjoyed this latest chapter, it's a nice contrast from the previous one. I liked the overall relaxed and comfortable family feeling. And it's always fun to see what goes on in the Shindou household, especially when you know Yuki is just going to do something naughty! Great job!

Scarlet		2006-12-27	id # 29668
My word.. I've just read this from the start to the latest installment. I can't find enough words to tell you how incredible this series is. It's such a rare, unique and fresh essence that you've captured. I truely love the interactions between Eiri and Shuichi. Every chapter makes me want to laugh and weep all in the same instance.. and that is a feeling I haven't encountered in a long time. The holiday chapter was such a pleasure to read. Thank you so much for posting, it's truely made my night.

ashcat		2006-12-27	id # 29670
chpt 23: I love it! So beautiful and sweet :) you are such an amazing writer thank you so much for sharing with us :D

tsubaki		2006-12-28	id # 29681
Chapter 23: Holidays - Naughty Eiri. But certainly, that is SO true. They're all nuts and they deserve each other! I love the relationship going on between these two, it's just so... balanced. I'm really liking it, enjoying another edition of plausible exchange between these two lovers. I can so see it happening and Eiri is still rather IC. Brilliant.

Iname		2006-12-28	id # 29694
lol. I loved it! I was waiting for centuries for the next one- but I think I've read this in another place! Have you posted this somewhere else before? ^______^ At any rate- thanks for the long awaited update and hope you have another one soon!

Ray		2006-12-31	id # 29788
Another chapter for one of my favourite stories! Naughty naughty Yuki ^_^ Love, Ray

tsubaki		2007-01-03	id # 29880
Tenderly beautiful as always. It gives me such pleasure to read your work. I love how they have slowly and relentlessly built themselves their safe haven between each other. They NEED each other and they are slowly learning the ways of being in that kind of a relationship. Delightful, sigh-worthy and makes me oh so envious...

Vindaloo		2007-01-03	id # 29881
Cliche'? Maybe. But it's a real part of the relationship and nicely done. More to the point ...MORE!?!!!! YAYAYAYAAYAY These are absolutely wonderful.

Scarlet		2007-01-03	id # 29889
"Why would you want to be in here with me? It sucks." Splendid. I'm in love with your work. Please update soon!

ritsuko		2007-01-05	id # 29931
These are amazing. you're such a good writer. i hope you add more soon! keep up the good work. ^-^

bakayarona		2007-01-08	id # 30003
I absolute adore this series of one-shots! You are spot-on with the characterizations, yet you show them growing beyond the confines of the anime and manga in a plausible manner. I know it is terrible to say this, but I hope you are inspired to write these little snippets for a long time to come!

fuzzzybunnytoo		2007-01-09	id # 30024
Teh Road home was so sweet. I am just sitting here digesting it for a while...........

Rupan		2007-01-09	id # 30029
I've been following these for awhile now. All the way from FF.net to this site to stalking your LJ for sooner updates (forgive me? :P). I was devastated when this suddenly vanished form ff.net, so it's about time I declare my appreciation for uploading this on gurabite! I don't even know where to begin my praises. I simply adore these little samplets out the life of our favourite couple and I'm always deeply pleased to find a new one. Thank you for taking the time to share these with us.

Gabrielle Angelique	lestat_cherie@yahoo.com	2007-01-09	id # 30031
With a pineapple? O.o now that's new.

Bellehime [Leah]	seraphfim@gmail.com	2007-01-10	id # 30071
I love these! Keep them coming!

CactusDog		2007-01-11	id # 30073
Candy - I love it when you write these light-hearted shorts with poor Shuichi being teased and manipulated by evil Yuki. 'You two are just as bad as girls! What, did he pass you a note during practice' definitely favorite part! Keep up the great work!

Celeste		2007-01-14	id # 30137
God i love your kisses....

ashcat		2007-01-15	id # 30147
Chpt 26 is one of my favorites :) I think that sounds so like Eiri and Shu to have these games and buffers set up that still allow care to be shown but don't involve eiri having to be vulnerable :) I love how perceptive you've painted shu to be. Great job as always :)

Ray		2007-01-16	id # 30166
Just wonderful. So sweet, without being sappy. Please write more! Love, Ray

Vindaloo		2007-01-19	id # 30253
Another winner. My goodness, I love these. I particularly love the way this one catches Shu's sweetly vulnerable insecurity that can melt with a single kiss.

Anon		2007-01-31	id # 30477
I love your series!! The stories are so cute and funny!

Anon		2007-01-31	id # 30486
Once again floored. I'm speechless. Wonderful job!

Vindaloo		2007-01-31	id # 30487
I love, absolutely LOVE your "Yuki voice." For my money, you do the best job of anyone I've read (barring of course Murakami herself) of capturing the delightfully bent charm of these two. I also love the way you leave so much to the imagination, letting us be as prissy...or as bent...as we choose! Another home run.

fuzzybunnytoo		2007-02-06	id # 30584
ahhhhhhh!!!!!!!! So sad and sweet.

Celeste		2007-02-06	id # 30586
Incredibly poignant. Thank you.

Daxemon		2007-02-07	id # 30602
Deep and very very sweet.

tsubaki		2007-02-08	id # 30611
Kiss 29: Really loving the way you've addressed the many facets of this couple's lives together. They just seem more and more right every kiss I read, the dynamics seemingly complex but alive and, in a lot of ways, normal. There are so many ways to relate to your stories, possiblities that a reader can find in common. It's both a joy to read and a lesson on what one could want... or even expect... of a relationship. Really sad that we are now only one story short of the 30-kiss limit. Many thanks for these cute stories; Cheers!

Anon		2007-02-09	id # 30628
Aww...I loved it. Update soon!

Ray		2007-02-16	id # 30731
I can't believe it's the end (sniff). This was an awesome ride :D So sweet, and promising... I hope to see new stories from you soon! Love, Ray

Celeste		2007-02-16	id # 30733
I can't believe this is the end:-( OMG and what a wonderful chapter it was... It was as warm as the sun setting before Shu and Eiri's eyes... Thank you so much for All the kisses, you have been an inspiration and a pleasure to read.

Iname		2007-02-16	id # 30737
Kya! It's so adorable! I love your tiny stories! And so please this one is a smidge longer. So sweet. I love sweet Eiri...I think we all do, ne? Please do right more!

daxemon		2007-02-16	id # 30738
Please tell me this is not the end. Start another one.....start another one {-weeps desperately-}. Say it ain't so. You have sucked me in.... so please don't leave me here wanting and not getting. Please, Please, Please. Don't make me beg. I know it say 30 Kisses, but please I.Want.More. Couldn't you extend it to 50 or say 100 Kisses. I think that that would be alright with me. If in the end that my wishes cannot be granted I will say this one thing. I feel blessed to have had at least the 30. THANKS.

miki	aspasia@arrakis.es	2007-02-17	id # 30744
well, what can I say... I´ve loved this fic since the beguining and I was really glad when you decided to continue it. Some of the chapters have made me laugh, others have made me feel angst and most of then have left a warm feeling in my heart... with few words you were able to transmit how deep the love of our couple was, how much they shared... I have my favourites: "water to whet the appetite" "superstar" "twilight" "electric" "ano sa" "snap" "content" and, number one, "sleepy sex". I really liked "heaven redux" too, but, as it was the last one, it left me longing for more... can we dream with a sequel?? Anyways, thank you very much for sharing this fic with as and congratulations for your writting skills. I´m sorry I didn´t review often, but my english is horrible (so you can see...). I hope we´ll read more of you soon. Love!

Gabrielle Angelique	lestat_cherie@yahoo.com	2007-02-17	id # 30746
Wonderful... It's sad to know that this is the last kiss. It was so sweet too. The feelings of companionship and real love you portrayed with the characters are so heartfelt. I've always been sensitive and I think I have felt what you want your readers to feel in your kisses. I hope you write more. Thanks for the good read.

Gabrielle Angelique	lestat_cherie@yahoo.com	2007-02-17	id # 30747
Wonderful... It's sad to know that this is the last kiss. It was so sweet too. The feelings of companionship and real love you portrayed with the characters are so heartfelt. I've always been sensitive and I think I have felt what you want your readers to feel in your kisses. I hope you write more. Thanks for the good read.

Alex	shiodayumi@yahoo.fr	2007-02-17	id # 30756
I am almost sad. It is the best “Gravi” fanfic I had the pleasure to read. Thanks.

Yukinshu4eva	tennisanddancechick@hotmail.com	2007-02-19	id # 30796
;~; NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO It can't be over! ;~; I really enjoyed reading each of these and looked forward to each one. Please start a new series, I enjoy the way you write these two! ^^

sakura		2007-04-08	id # 31626
i can picture that beach PERFECTLY.wonderful writing ^_^

sakura	XKurai_SakuraX@yahoo.com	2007-04-09	id # 31650
the ending was so sweet. ^_^ i liked reading this entire collection of stories.hope to read more by you soon!