Reviews for Brotherly Love
| ashcat |
2006-06-16 |
id # 20678 |
| Chpt 1 & 2: I laughed at several parts of this story. Judy was definitly a surprise - and it was nice to see a Maiko and Shu fic. I am glad you are posting some stories again :) |
| Despina |
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2006-06-16 |
id # 20679 |
What a fun glimpse of Shu and Maiko! And K! I love getting Maiko's impression on Shu's co-workers.
Well done, as always.
Des |
| Kinomi |
2006-06-16 |
id # 20696 |
| Now that was funny. She probably will never get over thinking he's an idiot. With friends like that who can blame her? I'm always impressed when writers can handle club scenes with so many people interacting and moving around the space. Well done all around. |
| Yuki |
2006-06-16 |
id # 20706 |
| I like this story. You dont see much of Maiko or Judy in fan fics. Im glad you used them both! Your style of writing is good and easy to read. Nice job! Keep up the good work. |
| EIRI-CHICK |
2006-06-18 |
id # 20755 |
Hahahahahahahahahahahaahah!!!
"Shuichi explained, speaking loudly, "Weird things happen around the two of them, especially if they argue or they're happy. I've seen lots of things get broken, bullets fly, vehicles burn, and buildings explode."
Heehee! I don't know what to say! I just laughed and laughed, especially when I read that ^ line!
More, MORE!
EIRI-CHICK
(-_-)=~
aka
PIKACHU GODDESS
(o';'o) |
| Anon |
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2006-06-18 |
id # 20766 |
| Got bored with chapter 1 and gave up on it. The storyline just dragged too much. |
| kmyth |
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2006-06-18 |
id # 20782 |
| (chpt. 1) Loved it! The part where K shot the other car's tire for trying to taking the parking spot was so hilarious. I definitely pictured him doing it. It was so K. My other favorite part was when Maiko compared Shuichi to Hard Gay. Hahhaha! That's such a good insult, and it also brought the story into the modern Japanese setting in a really funny way. The sibling mockery seemed really natural too. |
| kmyth |
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2006-06-18 |
id # 20784 |
| (chpt. 2) More Hard Gay references! I loved how Judy entered into the fic. Haha. Welcome to Shuichi's world. The craziness XD |
| Aries |
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2006-06-20 |
id # 20842 |
Aja-sama this story warmed my heart. It made me laugh out loud hard that my parents thought I was getting murder? But I was laughing...how does muder and laughing fall together. Anyway, It was A joy to read. I love all your Stories ^_^
~Aries |
| bobii |
henati_queen13@hotmail.com |
2006-06-20 |
id # 20855 |
| lovely. thankyou for including the Hard Gay links^^ I watched it on the library coomputers and got alot of weird stares as I actually fell out of my chair laughing so hard...especially when i started associating Shuichi and Hard Gay together ^^ |
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