Reviews for Care
| ldygizarme |
2006-05-28 |
id # 19780 |
aww, that was very sweet! i loved the last line about Tatsuha rolling with Ryu's well-intended punches!
and besides all the fluff, this line really made me giggle: Shoes were very important; if he walked around outside without shoes, he would get glass in his feet and Never Walk Again and Tohma had made it very clear that Ryuichi should not aspire to be disabled no matter how much fun the wheelchairs looked.
so very Ryu! glad you momentarily came out of "retirement" to share this with us!!
~ lg |
| ht |
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2006-05-29 |
id # 19782 |
Congrats on your graduation. I wish you the best in your endeavors.
And I hope you continue to contribute to gurabite. You've always been one of my favorite authors here. |
| EIRI-CHICK |
2006-05-29 |
id # 19786 |
KAWAII! That was sweet!
I'm so GLAD to see yu writing for us again! I hope that you plan on sticking around again, as I truly missed your thought-provoking stories!
Keep up the excellent work!
EIRI-CHICK
(-_-)=~
aka
PIKACHU GODDESS
(o';'o) |
| Marsy |
marsgirlly@yahoo.com |
2006-05-29 |
id # 19789 |
| You already knew that I loved this piece. Love it so much |
| Regina |
2006-05-29 |
id # 19790 |
That was so adorable! :D I loved Ryuichi's mannerisms, and the way you portrayed him. I also very much enjoyed the debut of Tatsuha towards the end. *squeals* XD Certainly a plus. x3 Once again, my dear, your prose is very intelligent and artistic and fun to read. I love your writing, and I always will. ^___^ Thanks for sharing! And congratulations on your graduation!! :D *throws confetti*
~*Regina*~ |
| Anon |
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2006-05-29 |
id # 19792 |
| Aw, this was sweet. |
| Jules |
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2006-05-29 |
id # 19800 |
| I quite liked it -- thanks for posting it. |
| Aja |
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2006-05-29 |
id # 19805 |
I love the way your Ryuichi thinks. ^_~ Motorcycles are definitely more fun.
You already know I really liked this. I liked reading it again, too! |
| EmiChan |
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2006-05-30 |
id # 19820 |
| Why do I never log in on this thing anymore? Anyway, loved the drabble. So cute... Ryu's point of view is tons of fun. And congrats on graduation! |
| Iname |
2006-07-19 |
id # 24157 |
| Hey, this isn't bad at all! I like the innocence in this and frankly, this really sounds like Sakuma-san |
| absinthe90 |
2010-06-14 |
id # 37718 |
I never really got Ryuchi. On a superficial level he makes me laugh my head off, but on even a remotely psychological-insighty one he creeps me out. It really makes me wonder what kind of issues he must have had to remain so stuck in his childhood phase.
"Do you care for me?"
Ryuichi's gut reaction was to giggle and shake his head no.
What Tatsuha mistakes for a teasingly half-mean answer, is only the result of a completely honestly different way of thinking; but the youngest Uesugi accepts it anyway: he's in love. Great job!
P.S. I just got the weirdest deja-vu of commenting this. If I did already, apologies!
P.P.S. Thank you for your review! I am thrilled that my first review ever was from such a talented writer as you ^^ (no flattery intended). But what I am interested in is the more critical part - if you have any suggestions and editing to offer I would love to hear those. Feel free to add me on AIM/AOL. |
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